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| Subject: Hagane, Stealth, Ninja, Ninja, Thu Jun 20, 2013 4:57 am | |
| Hagane Minase ... basic information ___________________________________________ Nicknames: Shadow, Bloody Knight, Finisher Gender: Male Age: 24 Blood Type: AB- Village: Soragakure no Sato Village Rank: Head Jounin Skill Rank: S physical information ___________________________________________ (Refer to above picture or avatar for a picture) Hagane is a man who believes firmly in the appearance of a ninja as well as more. He believes that he is the epitome of the ninja. None of that dance around crap and powerplaying, Hagane believes more in the subtle ebb and flowing of battles. Wearing a mask and changing his general appearance between battles to keep himself a mystery it is almost impossible to peg him with a common appearance. Though the similarity between his appearance usually contains a flak jacket, ninja tool kits, a mask, and a cup. The color scheme is subject to change as well as the clothing every time that Hagane sheds blood, he is a ninja.
Height: 185 centimeters/ 6 foot 1 Weight: 79.3 KG/ 175 pounds Measurements: N/A
personality information ___________________________________________ Hagane believes in the trueness of the ninja image. Being sneaky, decietful, and above all, an unseen warrior. Hagane believes that if he is never seen no one could mount a defense against him. He hates that the name of ninja has been brought to such a light or even a light to begin with. The combat between two ninja should end in a single move and a fast strike, the ninja that is superior making a move and doing what needs to be done for the sake of his village, going from this limb Hagane is fiercely loyal to his village due to his belief that loyalty is the foundation which separates the world from a chaotic and anarchistic hell hole. The deceit of Hagane is renowned, in the past he has betrayed his village under orders in order to betray a group of ex-friends who had betrayed the village of Soragakure for his greatest display of loyalty. His personality has been warped many problems and many emotionally warping situations. He has lost all of his personal ambitions and has become somewhwat of a robot, designed for his own village and functioning in such a way. Hagane has developed a lack of emotion and has become completely devoted to Soragakure... The village of Soragakure and the nation of Sora as well as the people of Sora and leaders are all separate things in the mind of Hagane. As a ninja he is loyal to the military force of the village of Soragakure no Sato. Meaning that civilians of the nation, civilians of the village, other ninja and even the village leadership are expendable in the defense of the ideals and survival of Soragakure no Sato as an independent military force and self sustaining village. It was following this principle that his fiercely loyal and skillful ways landed him in the position of Head Jounin with no emotions left in his body.
Sexuality: Heterosexual (Straight) Likes:
- ---Soragakure
- --- Strength
- --- Stealth
Dislikes:
- --- Other villages
- --- People unaffiliated with Soragakure
- --- Traitors to their cause
combat information ___________________________________________ Clan: None Ninja Specialization:
Main: Genjutsu Sub: Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu
Elemental Specialization: Futon, Katon, Doton
Main: Fuuton Sub: Katon/Doton
Strengths:
- Enhanced physical durability.
- Extreme silence when moving
- Extreme speed
Weaknesses" [*]Lack of emotional response capability [*]Lack of willpower/drive [*]Unable to affiliate with anyone Fighting Style: Stealth/Assassination INVENTORY [*]Simple Equipment:
- Shuriken X 15
- Kunai X 15
- Blank Scrolls X 5
- Paper Bombs X 10
- Light Bombs X 10
[*] TECHNIQUES Genjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Kakou Canon/Custom: Custom Element: None Type: Genjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Tiger Seal Description: A genjutsu that spreads a thin air of chakra outward in a similar manner to the technique "Temple of Nirvanha" creating a pressure on all ninja in the area reducing their movement speed moderately.
Name: Kamira Canon/Custom: Custom Element: None Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Monkey, Tiger, Snake Description: Activating this technique will place a thing piece of chakra around a target item touching the user. This chakra will spread to anything that it touches (up to three times) until it reaches a living being with a developed chakra network. This genjutsu will alter the senses of the target after touching them instantly causing them to have their senses reversed unknowingly to them. Name: Journey Into Black Darkness Canon/Custom: Canon Element: None Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Tiger Description: Activating this technique will instantly create a dome-like area around the user that will become pitch black nullifying the sight senses of anyone trapped inside. The range of this technique is 10 meters in all directions, escaping the range will remove the darkness effect. Name: Temple of Nirvanha Canon/Custom: Canon Element: None Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Tiger Description: This technique will spread a thin layer of chakra from the user across a massive distance (25 meters) creating an almost instant effect causing all those within the range of the technique to fall asleep in a coma-like state for the duration of the user putting chakra into the area or the target being removed from the area of effect from this technique. This can be counteracted to individual ninja by releasing the technique in the short time of feeling sleepiness and falling asleep.
Name: Sorazorashii Canon/Custom: Custom Element: None Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Monkey, Dragon, Snake Description: The user will preform the needed handseals and spread a thin layer of chakra around his fingers, hands, toes, and feet. Upon touching anything with these specific parts of the user's body within thirty seconds come into contact with another item or being. The touched object will take the appearance of something of similar size and behave as experienced most commonly in the past by the observer. For example if a rock was touched and made to be seen as a paper bomb, an experienced ninja would view the rock as exploding upon seeing it.
Name: Warifu Untensi Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Katon Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Snake Description: The user will preform the Snake handseal and upon doing so fill their eyes with a transferrable chakra. Anyone looking into the eyes of the user of this techniue will instantly change their perception of reality into a hell of fire. In other words, everything that is seen by this person will be seen as flame and fire, other people will be towers of fire, the ground will be a sea of fire, etc. This will also feel like fire and has been known to cause insanity in its targets.
Name: Ikamono Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Fuuton/Katon Type: Ninjutsu/Genjutsu Rank: S Jutsu Prerequisites: Having been attacked from a range of less than five meters as well as preforming the monkey seal. Description: Upon being attack and the seal being released the user will appear and feel to have exploded into a mass of flames, the flames will feel as if they are burning and appear as if they are real flames. A great wind will blow and push the flames in a pathway charging for seventy five meters in the direction of the attack causing the feeling of flame and wind, burning and being blown back, to the person afflicted by this technique. Meanwhile the user of this technique will dissapear in a manner similar to the substitution technique, replacing itself with the being of the lowest chakra level in the area (an animal, a child, a non ninja) in the same manner of replacement as using the substitution technique.
Ninjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Kaze Uindo Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: None Description: Using a focused set of wind chakra the user will create an incredibly sharp blade (think blade enhanced by wind chakra in terms of cutting power) out of wind with a condensed ball of wind to be held in the hand to be used as a hilt. The wind is captured in a blade-like appearance to give it the shape of a straight sword reaching a length of one meter.
Name: Sairai Uindo Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Dragon Description: Blowing after performing the Dragon handseal causes a blast of wind to be focused or unfocused based on the breathing style that the user chooses. Blowing away thrown projectiles and knocking back anyone without sure footing this is a low damage technique. Name: Fuuton Uindo Katon Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Fuuton/Katon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Dragon, Snake [Can charge this technique for multiple posts doubling it's effectiveness from the beginning post each turn charged. Charging requires the activation of no other technique during the entire post as well as mention to charging chakra in the mouth and hands.] Description: Expelling chakra from the mouth as fire and chakra from the hands as wind the user blasts a spreading wildfire across a large area that can be increased or decreased depending on how long the technique is maintained and how much chakra is built up.
Name: Koudo dai hedo Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Doton/Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Dragon, Tiger, Snake Description: The ninja using this technique will place their hands on the ground after the handsigns are complete. The ground will be moved creating a terraforming process altering the ground within immediate ten meter area by using a combination of earth to mold the ground and rip them apart and wind to place them and move them with speed enough to be combat effective.
Name: Doton Kabe Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Doton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Snake, Boar, Ox Description: The user places one hand on the ground and the other facing a direction. The chakra flow and earth type chakra will create a wall of solid earth to rise from the ground and place itself in front of the user in the direction of his free hand. Keeping the hand in that location will continue placing walls until a total of seven have been placed, these walls are made of a mix of mud, dirt, grass and stone and are typically very durable depending on the ground.
Name: Kaji omo Kyanon Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Monkey, Dragon, Ox, Rabbit Description: The user will preform the above handseals required for the activation of this technique. Upon doing so he will spread his chakra through his hands and touch a target. Once touched the target will be subject to fire chakra being shot into their body and burning from the inside out. Depending on the level of chakra put in, the target can survive or be cooked alive from the inside out.
Fuuinjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Chakra Jougo Canon/Custom: Custom Element: None Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: D-A Jutsu Prerequisites: Snake seal Description: The user preform the snake seal and use the chakra harnessed by this seal to bring forth a small imprint on one or both of their hands. Upon being touched by this seal the user can drain chakra from the target equal to that desired by the user (with a maximum draining of that equal to an A rank technique).
Name: Shado-Shikaku Seal Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Fuuton Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Monkey Description: A seal placed on one's own body, releasing this seal will give a great enhancement to one's speed, durability and rate of chakra release granting them a full body enhancement in almost every way for a short period of time. This is done by using chakra to store the potential energy within one's own body for a susstained period of time, the longer the user goes without unleashing the technique the longer the user can maintain the technique after it is released.
Name: Katon Kansei Canon/Custom: Custom Element: Katon Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Monkey, Snake Description: This technique, when activated, places a small pocket of fire chakra inside of another object. Upon another chakra network that is developed above that of an untrained civilian coming into contact with it, or the user of this technique activating it, the small pocket of chakra will explode in a way very similar to a paper bomb. The chakra is undetectable by the human eye.
Historical information ___________________________________________ [*] Hagane was born as a ninja, or that he knew that he would become a ninja. His family was a traditionalist family of ninjas and had been/have been working for Soragakure since it's founding. They never developed a unique bloodline, they never found a special characteristic among them, never developed a series of techniques to give them a great advantage over other clans or villages as they believes information should be free among allies and hated clans that kept their secret techniques to themselves. Anyway that is a story of another day, Hagane was born into this family that had nothing special but an excellent service record and was expected to do the same. Whether it was impressed upon him from a young age and on to be a good ninja and defend his village as well as train like a beast day in and day out for this goal or whether it was in his genes or even if it was destined to be, Hagane did just that. He followed in the footsteps of his family to the letter, training, fighting, training, learning, training, going to war, and then some more training between. And so it was that Hagane became a ninja. Hagane was born into a tumultuous time between the nations, there are always wars between the villages and this was no exception, his parents, being ninja of the clan that had nothing special of it at all, aside badassery, went all out and into the war zone which left him to be tutored and watched over from a childhood age and on by the ninja academy...Which he reffered to as home for the majority of his childhood life as his parents were rarely in the village and when they were they rarely even saw him as it was on business. Such it was that the emotional state of Hagane was begun to be thrown into the chaotic and horrid state that it would eventually become as an adult, though at the time his 100% focus during 100% of his life as a child learning ninja stuffs made him into quite the skilled genin after his one year early graduation from the academy...unfortunately for him there was no one there to support this accomplishment as his parents had died in the war. During these times of war genin were left behind often or sent to do very basic recon or supply gathering, it was the future of the village military force that rested with the genin generation and they weren't so good at fighting so they got the jobs that no one wanted to do that put them in no harms way and in no danger. Such it was that Hagane got his arsenal of missions began taking on dozens of D rank and many C rank missions for the war effort. Carrying supplies, buying supplies, tracking down livestock, harvesting food, aiding in the medical tents, (this one really messed him up mentally. Seeing dead people, dying people, wounded people and more on a daily basis while sticking neelds in them and watching them die is not great for a 10-11 year old child.) and even rarely going into the field to give repots to the ninja squads from the headquarters as there were never enough communication ninja in the village, sensory is not so popular among the ninja. It was during this time that he realized, a few ninja that could kills someone every day, be sneaky, stealthy, and above all, a ninja, would make the war effort a lot smoother. So he became a true ninja as he calls himself from then on. His chuunin exams were rather easy and it was one of the largest graduating classes from the exams that there ever was. The easiness of the exam overshadowed his first among the ninja that graduated and highest rated of them all making him look like a fool that got a pass into chuunin-dom when in reality he was ready for some of the hardest chuunin exams in history had they been brought upon him. This didn't help his self esteem but by this point in his life he had already devoted his life to Soragakure and the family name. He was basically a robot with a heart and brain at this point but that would be lost. As he aged he lost friends, more of his family, gained new family and the only thing that remained as a constant in his life was that he got missions, did them, and continued the same process day in and day out, and was happy with that as that was all that he ever imagined that life was. A successful military track record such as that is what earned him his position among the ANBU of Soragakure. An elite squad of stealth based ninja who carried out missions on private order by the kage of the village. Sorakage hand picked all of the anbu black ops members and it was a great honor to be a part of them though it was secret and so the honor was kind of rejected beyond the closest friends and family as well as the Sorakage confidants that were privvy to the information. Mary sueing on Hagane took the lead of the ANBU squads soon after he was inducted into them at the staggering age of 17 years. He was renowned as a good ninja but known and feared as a true ninja. Sneaking around, assassinations, recon, those were the missions he was most skilled at aside from directing others on missions. He was becoming a political force due to his track record and unwavering resolve as well as the placement that he was getting due to his successes and amazing ability on the battlefield, in the ninja field, and in the field of command and tactics. So that when the war ended he hardly even noticed as he was still playing the tactical field of inner village politics and had his attention fully compressed at all times. As he aged he eventually became promoted to Head Jounin at the age of 22. A much more reasonable age as he was hitting his peak of preformance and had more than proved himself worthy of the position within the ranks of Soragakure as one of the prime candidates for Sorakage due to his unshaking resolve and brilliant successes both on and off the battlefield. A heavily rewarded soldier of many battles and a true ninja assassin of the night. A perfect combination for such a turbulant world... miscellaneous information ___________________________________________ [*] Face Claim: N/A - Ninja as Hagane Other Characters: [*] Password: --- Extras: [*]
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| Subject: Re: Hagane, Stealth, Ninja, Ninja, Thu Jun 20, 2013 6:49 am | |
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- I'm a bit unsure about someone renowned for an act of treachery being trusted with the head jounin spot.
- The list tag on the weaknesses is broken.
- All jutsu names also need an English translation.
- Is Journey into Black Darkness another name for the Kokuangyo no Jutsu?
- I'm not sure about the idea of combining two chakra elements into one jutsu without a KKG. I'd need a second opinion.
- You're currently only at 16 jutsu, of the 40 allowed to S-ranks. Are you sure you want so few?
- "Mary sueing" Did you put that in, or did someone edit it into your app? Regardless, rising to ANBU captain that soon after entry is way too quick.
- The infamous betrayal mentioned in the personality doesn't seem to be in the history.
- Add the rules password.
- If the FC is an original artwork, then put that down as such and link to the artist.
- Needs an RP sample.
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| Subject: Re: Hagane, Stealth, Ninja, Ninja, Fri Jun 21, 2013 6:35 pm | |
| Ryuu put his app up first, he has dibs on the Head Jounin spot in Sora. | |
| | | Uchiha Shoshi Head Admin
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| Subject: Re: Hagane, Stealth, Ninja, Ninja, Fri Jun 21, 2013 7:26 pm | |
| Actually whoever completes their app first is granted the spot. | |
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| Subject: Re: Hagane, Stealth, Ninja, Ninja, Fri Jun 21, 2013 9:51 pm | |
| No ryuu gets it he posted it up first so means that you have to pick another rank | |
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| Subject: Re: Hagane, Stealth, Ninja, Ninja, Sat Jun 22, 2013 2:09 am | |
| Also don't need so much spacing, clean that up a bit | |
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