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Posts : 38 Age : 29 Village : Umigakure Rank : Suikage
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| ❊ Izioka, Alohi ❊
"Practice makes perfect, but nobody’s perfect, so why practice?" Personal Information NICKNAME(S): Allie AGE: 33 GENDER: Male BLOOD TYPE: AB VILLAGE: Umigakure no sato VILLAGE RANK:Suikage SKILL RANK: Kage EXTRAS:~ Appearance Information Height: 5’10 Weight: 178lbs Hair color: Blue Eye Color: Grayish/Blue Looks Image: Looks Description: Alohi wears a dark blue jacket that looks almost equivalent to the color of black. Underneath the jacket he wears a white button up shirt that from the color his dark blue but as the color stretches down to the rest of the shirt it gradually turns white. The button up shirt, for some odd reason, is only buttoned in one spot and it’s the middle area between the torso and abdomen regions. Underneath that shirt he wears a faded midnight blue/cobalt blue T-Shirt. He wears black gloves that hug his fingers to wear it looks like he just has super dark hands. His hear is spiky/messy and his various colors of dark blue, midnight blue, steel blue, and turquoise. His pants are black as well as his shoes, and he wears the Umigakure insignia (headband) around his left leg right above the kneecap. Although it is suppose to be a secret, he has the Umigakure symbol tattooed on his tongue, in honor of his village. Personalily Information Personality Description: Alohi is a cool, and moreover controlled type of person. He really chooses how to adapt to certain situations depending on what the situation is. That being said, he doesn’t exactly have a set “personality” because it changes to adapt to his environment. Which in his case is both good and bad? If that makes any sense whats so ever. Good because he can pull off the ultimate poker face in seconds flat, bad because, well let us just say that he is forgetful and irresponsible sometimes, but I guess it’s his forgetfulness and his irresponsible persona which has formed him to become a natural born leader. Likes: - Fish,
[♥]Water, [♥]Bubbles, [♥]People Dislikes:[♠]Battles, [♠]Treason, [♠]Drought/Arid Areas Catch Phrases:”Ayyee” Nindo: "Half our life is spent trying to find something to do with the time we have rushed through life trying to save." Weapons And Items Name: Kohaku Type: Sealing Jar Appearance: http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Kohaku_no_J%C5%8Dhei Rank: S rank Special Abilities: It has the ability to seal just about anything. Currently the villages 8 tailed Kraken is sealed within the jar, and will not be released unless the situation demands it. Origin: This weapon comes from the Sage of Six Paths, and Alohi stumbled upon it when he was off on one of his journeys away from the village. Clan Information ~Naruto Lands Of Shinobi~Tell me something about your clan.~Clan Application~Clan Name:~ Bloodline Name: ~ Bloodline Ability:~ Location: ~ Clan History: ~ Requirements:~ Members:~ Jutsu:~[/b] Jutsu Information Jutsu Specialist: Genjutsu Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Kenjutsu Bloodline: ~ Element Affinity: Water Sub Element Affinity: Water Sub Element Affinity: Lightning Advanced Element: Acid Special Characteristics:*Large Chakra Pool- Can perform jutsu’s for longer periods of time than other ninja *High Stamina- Can last longer in fights than most ninja *Intelligence- His intelligence his 34% higher than most *Speed Increase- When raining, he gets a 35% speed boost Flaws/Weaknesses: *Dead Reaction- He can never, and won’t ever be able to make the first move in a battle because of how late he always seems to be. *Dehydration-When in places that lack water such as fields, deserts, mountains, and forests his speed drops by 15% Jutsu Template: Academy techniques don't count to overall amount of techniques, meaning they are free.Academy Jutsu- Spoiler:
Academy jutsu Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu -- Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Requirements: N/A Type:Ninjutsu Description: A technique that allows the user to quickly switch places with another nearby object.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu -- Clone Technique Rank: E Requirements: N/A Type:Ninjutsu Description: A technique that creates intangible clones of the user. Because they are not real at all, they will dissipate if they come into contact with almost anything. They also cannot interact with their environment, easily giving away what they really are.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu -- Rope Escape Technique Rank: E Requirements: N/A Type:Ninjutsu Description: The basic art of freeing oneself from rope bonds.
Name: Henge no Jutsu -- Transformation Technique Rank: E Requirements: N/A Type:Ninjutsu Description: A technique that allows the user to alter their appearance. Though they may appear differently, they do not take on any of the physical characteristics of whatever they transform into.
Name: Kinobori no Waza -- Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Requirements: N/A Type:Ninjutsu Description: A technique derived from a training exercise that allows the user to walk on walls by focusing enough chakra through their feet to cause them to 'stick' to the surfaces.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza -- Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Requirements: N/A Type:Ninjutsu Description: A technique derived from a training exercise that allows the user to walk on the surface of water by focusing an even amount of chakra through the soles of their feet.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu -- Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Requirements: N/A Type:Ninjutsu Description: A high-speed movement that allows the user to move short distances at nearly untraceable speeds, accomplished by using chakra to boost the user's reflexes.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D+ Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Suiton Jutsu’s *Rank S - Spoiler:
Suiton Release: Total Body Liquefying Technique [Suiton: Ekika Zenshin no Jutsu] Effect: The user turns every physical thing about themselves to liquid. Description: Alohi turns his whole entire body into a liquid form. Once in this form he can practically control all things liquid simply by submerging himself into the liquid. He can create himself to be much larger than he already is, and/or take the form and shape of whatever he puts his mind to, from the size of a small mouse to the size of a very large whale. Basically this jutsu allows the user to shape shift if submerged in an appropriate amount of liquid. This jutsu stays permanent but the user cannot use any of his other jutsu’s while in this form. Range: N/A Rank: S Water/Suiton Ninjutsu, Rank: S Water Style:Unstoppable Cyclone Technique [Suiton: Mukyuu Teikiatsu no Jutsu] Effect: After creating a spiralling column of water the user turns it on it's side and makes it spin faster. They then release it and let it go on a speeding rampage destroying almost anything in its way. Must be near a very large source of water. Range: 100 Feet Rank: S Water Style: Water Element; Rising Blast [Suiton; Suishouha] Effect:Using large amounts of chakra, the user creates water from thin air and forms so much that it creates a mini-tidal wave. The water then does not dissipate for the duration of the battle, thus creating an arena where the user has a large advantage. If the climate is exceptionally arid, such as a desert, the water only lasts for a small while, before draining into the sand. The depth of the water once the wave has settled is anywhere between 8 to 10 feet. Range: Chakra put in determines range Rank: S
*Rank A - Spoiler:
Water Release • Water Jet Stream [Suiton • Mizu Funsha Kasui] Effect: A skill where the user has water burst up from the ground, that swirls high up into the air. The waters come together, as they come bursting downwards as a powerful moving stream of water. Capable of tearing through rocks and the surrounding fairly easily. Range: 15 Feet Rank: A
Water Release: Devil's Domain Water Torture [Suiton: Ijin Ryouiki Mizu Goumon] Effect: Creates a circular flow of water which rises above their heads and comes crashing down upon the opponent and starts compacting causing tremendous pressure on the opponent. Description: A skill in which has to be used when the opponent is within the presence of a large body of water. The chakra quickly flowing through the water, causes more then fifty percent of the water to rise up around the opponent and come crashing down upon them like a circular flowing wave. Once crashing into the opponent, it begins to condense itself smaller and smaller. Increasing the pressure until the opponent bursts. Range: 10 Feet Rank: A
Water Release • Crashing Pillar of Heaven [Suiton • Gachan Hashira no Ten] Effect: A skill in which the user begins to gather a wide amount of moisture from the air. Within the air, more and more water comes together being materialized by the users chakra. Coming together, it makes this large pillar of water within the sky, often going unnoticed by the opponent. The user then waits for the opportune moment, and sends the pillar crashing down in order to smash the opponent in an incredible amount of force. Range: 40 Feet Rank: A+
Water Style: Grand Water Explosion Technique [Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu] Effect: After performing a long string of handseals the user creates a spiraling column of water that will circle the user and afterwards the user can force it to erupt into the opponent. Due to the immense force of the attack the opponent will be under the mercy of the water as it drags them away from the user. Range: 60 Feet Rank: A Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu [Water Release: Water Dragon Blast Technique] Rank: A Requirement: Available Source of Water. Description: A Suiton ninjutsu technique using water as its base. The ninja manipulates the water around them into the shape of a large dragon that attacks their opponent as a torrential blast. Suiton: Joushou Kanketsusen [Water Release: Rising Geyser] Rank: A Requirements: None. Description: The user's chain of handseals will cause chakra to burst through from beneath the opponent and produce a rising geyser to knock them upwards. The geyser will continue to flood for while and can stop to let the enemy fall to the ground, and even re-burst to push them upwards again. Suiton: Haidoro Panpu [Water Release: Hydro Pump] Rank: A Requirements: None. Description: The user will first have to go through a long series of handseals before being able to release an extremely powerful and regular jet of water from their mouth that can blow the enemy away and even pin them with its force to a wall as it crushes them. Suiton: Mizu Chuujou [Water Release: Water Columns] Rank: A Requirement: Available Source of Water. Description: Water floods out into the surrounding area then is condensed in different areas, spouting upward swiftly, to make columns that can strike a target from underneath and can then collapse upon the target if they miss. Suiton: Suijin Heki [Water Release: Water Barricade] Rank: A Requirement: Available Source of Water. Description: A Suiton ninjutsu technique where the ninja uses already existing water and raises it around them in a circular barrier, utilizing a special handseals of placing the right thumb-up fist into the left palm. Only extremely powerful ninjas can use this technique without available water. Suiton: Daibaku no Jutsu [Water Release: Great Explosion Technique] Rank: A Requirements: Minimum of Good 'Jounin' or Very Good Chuunin Chakra Capacity. Description: A technique that creates a massive tidal wave of water in all directions. This jutsu requires a an immense amount of chakra since it basically reforms the terrain and can create a whole lake. -Suiton:Kaunta Rensu(Water Release:Counter lens) - This jutsu summons a lens-shaped watershield in front of the user as a last moment counter for jutsu, the lens cancels most jutsus by absorbing and dispersing whatever chakra comes incontact with it, once the lens dispels it joins the dispersed chakra turning into mist which can later be used in jutsus, meaning the jutsu that was meant to hit the user will instead be used against the foe, at a later time.
*Rank B - Spoiler:
Water Release: Water Dragon Technique [Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu] Effect: Creates a large dragon from water which has almost bunshin like intelligence allowing it to track down and target the opponent. Description: A technique which is a higher level water skill, creating a dragon made out of water. This technique is more effective when there is a large body of water around, and can reveal incredible destructive damage. The dragon also has a partial consciousness to track the opponent. Range: 30 Feet Rank: B
Water Release • Syrup Capture Field [Suiton • Mizuame Nabara] Effect: A skill in which the user can summon forth a stream of water from their mouth. This water spreads forth all onto the ground where a rushing opponent is coming to. The water, having its form changed actually is a very stick substance. Once the opponent is within the middle of the field, they will notice that their feet are stuck and they cannot move from their current spot. Giving opportunity to attack the opponent, as you need chakra infused feet to run over the field. Range: Depends on the amount of chakra used. Rank: B Seals: Serpent, Ram, Dragon
Raiton Jutsu’s *Rank S - Spoiler:
- Violent Thunderclap [Hageshii Jinrai] An extremely powerful Raiton ninjutsu that requires the pinnacle of chakra control to perform. The user gathers massive amounts of chakra into his palms and flattens it out into a disc extending over each hand that absorb any ambient electricity. Once the discs have collected enough ambient energy, the user smashes his palms together, creating a deafening thunderclap accompanied by a hemispherical electric shockwave that travels outward from the hands. With all of this occurring within a few seconds, it is clear to see why the utmost of chakra control is required. | Opponent is deafened and disoriented for two posts | S-Rank
- Dance of the Condemned [Keito no Mai] This jutsu, considered forbidden for its cruelty, partially shuts down a person's nervous system, sending them into a form of nervous shock that ends with the person being unable to move for a brief period. In order to perform this technique, the user must perform a long row of hand seals and then touch the victim's neck or spinal chord (touching clothing or armor in that area is fine, as long as it can't block electricity). Repeated use of this jutsu has been known to cause permanent nerve damage. | The victim is sent into nervous shock for one post, and is then paralyzed for another two posts. | S-Rank Kinjutsu
*Rank A - Spoiler:
- Lightning Scorch Technique [Denkou Yakekoge no Jutsu] The user performs a short row of hand seals, ending with his hands pointing towards his victim. Lightning bolts shoot out of his finger tips and dance along the victim's flesh, causing severe burns all over the body. This jutsu has the advantage of being difficult to block or dodge without the victim hiding behind something that doesn't conduct electricity.
- Human Lightning Rod [Hiraishin no Jintai] The user emits a powerful field of electrical energy; anyone caught within it gains a negative charge. The user positively charges the air around him, meaning that anyone within the field is constantly shocked by lightning. Although this jutsu is almost impossible to dodge while within the field, the field only extends 10 meters from the user. This jutsu also does a great job of disrupting electrical jutsu aimed at the user. | Chakra- 100 (Every Post) | Damage- 75 (Every Post) | Damage from electrical jutsu aimed at the user is reduced by 75. | Jounin
- Touch of the Lightning God [Raijin no Hadazawari] The user gathers a large amount of chakra into his fingertips and converts it to electricity. The electricity then bursts from the fingertips and seeks out the victim. The lightning doesn't rend the flesh, but instead eletrifys the opponent, seeking out and attacking the heart and nervous system. The pain this jutsu causes is said to be unbearable. Victims of this jutsu frequently have heart attacks within 24 hours after being hit, so medical care is highly advised.
- Grasp of the Lightning God [Raijin no Haji] The user gathers a tremendous amount of eletricity into their hands. The user then grabs the opponent with both hands and sets up a powerful current of eletricity through the opponent's body. This eletricity not only electrifies its victim, but also renders the area around where the opponent is holding immobile, although other parts of the victim's body can freely move.
- Lightning Cage Technique [Denkou no Ori no Jutsu] This technique uses chakra to set up a powerful web of electrical currents surrounding a victim. Lightning shoots from the user's fingertips and surrounds the victim, shocking him as the current surrounds him. The cage deals little damage to those trapped within, but anyone trying to leave is in for a real shock. Unfortunately, while the cage does a good job of keeping most people inside, it also damages anyone trying to reach into the field to attack. Magnetic currents protect the victim from attacks from metal objects, and electrical attacks are likewise useless. | Effect lasts three posts.
- Lightning Screen [Denkou no Shahei] After performing a row of hand-seals, the user places his hands on the ground and in front of him a large and powerful field of lightning erupts from the ground and lasts for a few seconds before dissipating. This field not only shocks anyone unlucky enough to touch it, it also does a good job of deflecting lightning techniques, not to mention anything involving metal. |
- Static Clone Technique [Seidenki Bunshin no Jutsu] After a row of hand-seals, several electrical fields erupt from the user's hands and form into vaguely humanoid shapes. A simple genjutsu is used to then make the fields look like the user or anyone else the user chooses. Although the clones can't exert any physical force, if an opponent comes into contact with it, it dissipates and heavily shocks the him or her.| The clone has an agility level equal to the user's intelligence.
- Blade of the Lightning God [Raijin no Ittou] The user focuses chakra into either arm and collects ambient electricity into a tight lattice around the forearm and hand. By compressing the electricity and chakra together, the user forms a single-use electrical blade. While the blade has no real substance and thus cannot block or parry, its side-effect more than makes up for it - the area around that which is struck by the blade will be instantly shocked numb. | Area around the spot that the blade strikes will be completely numb for two posts. The blade disappears after striking the opponent, since all of its electricity enters the opponent during the strike. |
*Rank E - Spoiler:
Genjutsu’s Canon Genjutsu’s - Spoiler:
Kakkou's Genjutsu Interrogation Technique (Unnamed) Character Use: Kakkou Rank: - Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Type: Supplementary
Hidden Rock ninja Kakkou used this Genjutsu interrogation technique on Leaf kunoichi Rin. Because it was a war-time situation, Kakkou hoped he could extract troop movements and battle plans from the young ninja. To try and break her will, he put her under a Genjutsu sensory spell. Because of Rin's strong will she was able to resist the pressure and not reveal any information.
Kamira's Genjutsu (Unnamed) Character Use: Kamira Rank: - Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m) Type: Attack Special Note: Movie Two Only
This unnamed Genjutsu is a technique used by Kamira. Kamira will cause the area around the target to be enveloped by darkness. Once inside the black space, the target will see grotesque figures said to be tortured criminals, the previous victims of the technique. These grotesqueries will reach out and grab a hold of the target. They will then be thrown into the void to the mercy of a spectral dragon. The horrifying oni can even extend from the targets own body to attack them. All aimed at transfixing the victim with fear and shock while Kamira herself chokes and kills the target.
Kokuangyou no Jutsu - Journey into Black Darkness Technique Character Use: First Hokage (Manga), Second Hokage (Anime) Rank: A Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m) Type: Supplementary Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat.
Nehan Shouja no Jutsu - Temple of Nirvana Technique Character Use: Kabuto Rank: A Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+) Type: Supplementary
Nehan Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into a unconscious state. The target can avoid the spell by forming and using the dispel skill.
Utakata - Ephemeral Character Use: Uchiha Itachi Rank: Unknown Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Type: Supplementary
Utakata is a Genjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Uchiha Itachi. Itachi will start this technique by using only one finger on his right hand. His target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, he can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them.
Custom Genjutsu’s - Spoiler:
-Suiton:Shin Madou(Water Release:Large Clam Illusion) - A Jutsu that uses moisture in the air to create an image distortion, a mirage, however this is not a genjutsu but an optical illusion making jutsu, so it cant be dispelled like a genjutsu, its a perfect diversion/scape jutsu, it cant be dispelled, its chakra saturated so most doujutsu's cant see through it, the moisture masks any smells from being detected, and the target will be too distracted trying to dispel it rather than hear the user's movements Name: Incline Type: Genjutsu Rank: D Requirements: None Description: The person affected will feel as if they are walking up an incline. The incline is small, ranging from around 5 degrees to twenty degrees but will cost more stamina to walk up than a level plane. This genjutsu is difficult to break as few people can tell they are in it.
Name: Buzz Type: Genjutsu Rank: D Requirements: None Description: The person affected will hear a slight buzzing noise. It will be similar to the hum of a fridge audible at 55 decibels. For extra chakra input, the decibel level can be raised up to 80 decibels. The jutsu does nothing but distracts the opponent.
Name: Step-Over Type: Genjutsu Rank: C Requirements: None Description: This jutsu will create an illusion of the person, making them appear as if they are three inches to the left. This will make aiming at the user very difficult. This jutsu can affect several enemies at a time. Touching the user will dispel it or realizing it will allow it to be dispelled easily as well.
Name: Jutsu Destruction Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Requirements: None Description: This is used after the enemy uses a jutsu. Jutsu Destruction will make it appear as if the enemy's jutsu was dispelled. This can be an excellent tactic if used properly; however, due to the fact that it doesn't prevent the enemy's jutsu which must still be dealt with it's not a common tactic on the battlefield.
Name: Creation Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: D Requirements: None Description: A basic technique, it creates one inanimate object and inserts it into the opponent's senses, where they see the object until the caster of the genjutsu dispels it. Touch will not dispel this genjutsu; however, touching it with force (attacking) will. This can not be used to create a weapon being actively used.
Name: Removal Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: C Requirements: Creation Technique Description: A basic technique, it removes one inanimate object from the opponent's senses and prevents them from seeing the object until the caster of the genjutsu dispels it. This can not include anything the opponent is using or weapons that are being actively used.
Fuhen no Moegara no Jutsu [Eternal Embers Technique] Rank: S Description: The user will make the opponent feel like they are completely surrounded by fire. This will make the enemy scream and yell in pain as his body feels as if it is slowly being ripped apart by the flames. This jutsu activates every pain sensor in the target’s body, making them feel more pain than would be possibly by any other method. Post duration: 4 posts.
Katei Houmon [House Call] Rank: S Description: The user first molds chakra to make his opponent fall under this genjutsu. The opponent will then hear, smell, taste, and feel the user upon them. Sight is not available as the opponent can now feel their eyes sewn down. It would seem as if they are strapped onto a chair and the heat of a very bright light pours out onto the opponent's sweaty and smelly skin. The opponent can feel his eyes desperately try to find a vision and roll in their skull but it is too late. Post Duration: 6 Posts.
Magen: Shinigami no hōkai (Demonic Illusion: The Reaper's Demise) Rank: S Description:A dreaded genjutsu that almost alters all reality. The jutsu requires a short series handseals, but a very precise timing. The genjutsu should be casted just before a killing blow of an enemy reaches you. The enemy will then see that the scene has been changed drastically, putting him on the dying side instead of the attacking side. The genjutsu is so shocking that this may paralyze the enemy and leave him open for any attacks Duration:1 post
Endless Suffering Rank: S Description: The user performs the needed handseals, causing the target to immediately see themselves in a world of unbearable pain. They will see every wound they body has ever suffered open up again, and feel the combined pain of all those injuries again as they re-experience the entire ordeal. Duration: 2 posts
Acid Jutsu Rank S - Spoiler:
Acid Release: Acid Rain Technique [Suiton: Sansei-u no Jutsu] Effect: Covers the surrounding area in rain that is as hot and as lethal as acid itself. Description: Utilizing the famous techniques of the acid release, Alohi, after performing several hand signs creates an area affect jutsu that causes it to rain acid. Anyone or anything caught in the rain will be singed with every drop. The singes to burn and are rather painful to the touch. They hurt everyone but the user and can burn through just about anything except solid earth. Alohi can turn the jutsu on and off whenever he pleases but he can only turn it on at the most two times. Range: 32 foot radius Rank: S
Acid Release: Acid River Technique [Suiton: Sansei Kasen no Jutsu] Effect: A large river of acid is created and is at melting temperature if someone is to touch it or be submerged in it. Description: Utilizing the famous techniques of the acid release, Alohi, after performing several hand signs creates a large mass of acid that jets from his mouth onto the battle field which he then shoots toward his desired target or targets. The stream can only be shot in one direction and covers the field 25 feet vertically and 10 feet horizontally. This jutsu’s requires a large mass of chakra and should considerably be used before as a first move or a last resort. Range: 25 Rank: S
Rank A History and RP Sample History((Be warned this history is in 1st person) //The Love of a father Not too long ago, I was the son of a man of great proportions. A man who practically ruled the water of the sea, the blue honey of the world, The Suikage. It was hard being the son of a man so great because he was either to busy to spend time with his son, or I will always become the idol of attention and become indirectly famous. At the time I did think it was nice, having a father respected by his people, and being the son of such a great man, I never thought that someone like me would ever make it that far. My dream was just making through the ninja academy, and if I felt like it then I might have even considered aiming for the rank of chuunin. I never thought of myself to ever be something all high and mighty. Everyone else did, so why didn’t I? Just because my father is some holy saint who protects the village from every single threat that comes its way, doesn’t mean I should be responsible for filling if shoes should the day come he passes. I don’t want to see my dad go, and I don’t want to be the one to take his place, but I am afraid I have no choice. My name is Alohi Izioka, my friends call me Allie though, so does everyone else including my father. I graduated the ninja academy at the age of 6, and became a genin at the age of 8. I thought I would be done from there but no. A fire burned deep inside me and before I knew it I was more than just some other genin of Umigakure, I wasn’t only just the son of Akia Izioka, Suikage of Umigakure, I was a born legend, I knew I would have to take my father’s place, I wouldn’t want him to pass in vein, and I would want to disgrace my family name, I have a rep to uphold and I wouldn’t want anyone to put us down for nothing. When the chuunin exams came around I managed to pass the first three challenges with no sweat thanks to my teammates Yunue and Ikaro and with the great teaching skills of our teacher Gaou Sensei. They all taught me that no matter what happens, things might not always go your way even if you want them to go a completely different way, you have to learn how to adapt to everything whether you like it or not. When you learn to adapt then you will learn how to live life to its full extent whether than praying for the day to be over or just doing things to get by. It is you who has to take that extra step and push forward rather than have someone hold your hand. Those words stuck with me and soon I managed to push forward. I pushed my hardest into the belly of the beast. I didn’t want to let anyone down and before I could fully understand what I was actually doing for not only my friends or my dad, but for myself, I became a chuunin. Something I thought would never happen actually happened. The moment my dad found out he threw a gigantic village party for not only myself, even though I was the host, but for everyone else who became chuunin as well. Just to think though, If I didn’t become a chuunin this party wouldn’t be happening. Almost all of my friends became chuunin and the ones that did were at the party. Being pampered isn’t really all it’s cracked up to be, but hey somebody has to enjoy it, might as well be me. //Justice of Will As the days go by and as I age, my father does the same. Pretty soon he has to resign from his position as Suikage which means that I am next in line. I didn’t know how I should feel about it. It was all too much; I was just satisfied with being a chuunin. I became a chuunin when I was 12, and several, lazy years after that I became a jounin when I was 22. My father at the time is 68 and he is nearly ready to retire. I don’t blame him. An old bag of bones isn’t suit to protect a full village. I knew the day would come for me to take his place, I just didn’t think he would have to get so old for me to realize that I would have to be the leader of all these people. I hate being put in positions of authority, cause of I screw up, I have so many disappointed eyes to face, and I don’t want that pressure. I don’t want any pressure, with pressure comes confusion and with confusion comes disappointment, that’s just how I’ve been seeing it for years and I don’t think my perception of life will ever change. Not even the slightest thing will change my mind, and I hate to say it, but whether I like it or not, I better get used to people calling me Suikage-sama. Lord Allie that has a nice ring to it. Several years in the final days of my dad’s resignation, I feel a rather unpleasant rumble in my stomach, I would have half thought I was hungry but no it was something else. Was I afraid? This was the first time I have ever faced something head one, something that was handed to me that I pushed away. I was sitting in front of my father and the village elders as they talked and discussed things about me on whether I was the one to lead the village to safety, on whether I was cut out for the job. Village Elder Isa Suito was telling my father on what her opinion on me was, she was saying things like , “Your son has excelled through many things in life without a scratch on that pretty little face of his, do you think he will know what to do when that face does get scratched for the first time in his life?” and then my dad gave his typical response of, “This is my son and I know for a fact that he won’t let this village down, HIS village down, he loves this village more than I do and although it doesn’t seem like it, he has a burning passion for the lives of this village more than God himself,” Those words dug deep in my heart and I literally almost wanted to cry, but I didn’t, I just kept to myself and waited for the meeting to be over. Several hours into the long debate my father and some of the other elders told me to wait outside so they could finally discuss their final verdict alone. I didn’t disobey their orders, simply because my ass was hurting after 4 hours of sitting down on this coral carved seat. I walked outside and looked up at the water. The only thing between me and it was a large dome That was covered in the chakra of my father, and that chakra would soon be passed down to me. Am I ready for that much power? //The Verdict Several years after that day the elders met with my father It was time for them to tell me what they had discussed. The explained every little detail of their conversation and soon my dad walked out from his office to the elder meeting. He was holding his hat and his robe and handed them both to me. I was now 34 at the time and didn’t know a lot about authority and what not but apparently they thought I had what it took to look after the village. Once I put on the outfit of the Suikage my dad told me to put my hands out in front of me and his hands began to glow a bluish green chakra. He places his palms on the back of my hands and I quickly felt his chakra rush through me and mix with my own. The feeling at first was unbearable but after thirty seconds of fidgeting I finally managed to get a hold of myself and soon I was finally the one to lead and rule the village. I was finally the go to man, I was finally Lord Allie, the Villages Hidden in the Seas, Suikage. After everything’s that’s happened so far, I actually wonder if I am cut out for this job, My dad is old and I would hate to disappoint him before he passes. Looks like I got to fight for the both of us now, just hope I got what it takes. RP SampleThe day was getting old as the sunlight peered through the blue honey of the see. Lord Allie walked onto the coral steps of his luxurious abode and off into the people of the village. After a long day of filing and writing his signature one paper after paper he owed it to himself to have a nice long walk, not only for himself but for his dad. He hasn’t been out in ages and it was time for him to pay his old man a visit before the day was over. The fish outside of the dome were just as graceful as the birds in the sky as they swiftly swam around as if they were playing with one another. It was surely a lovely day. Everything seemed more peaceful than it usually was, and it was good to enjoy the day while it lasted. Maybe things were getting better for everyone. Other detailsFaceclaim~ Role Player NameAlohI Izioka Password Admin Checked
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| Subject: Re: Suikage Alohi Izioka Sun Mar 24, 2013 8:26 am | |
| add a paragraph for looks please
add 2 more to Persona please
idk about that sealing pot lol. You'd have to take that up with Naoko there, but I guess not everyone will respond to their name by voice when called. So that's a huge drawback.
Your SHape Shifting will restrict you to Melee if I understand that correctly? Which is fine.
Water Style:Unstoppable Cyclone Technique [Suiton: Mukyuu Teikiatsu no Jutsu] An S rank attack will be able to combat this and negate it such as any other jutsu. Equal strength like a Chidori or Rasengan, etc..
Water Style: Water Element; Rising Blast [Suiton; Suishouha]- This won't be classified as an Attack and won't do actual damage unless the opponent is stupid enough to drown.
Water Release: Devil's Domain Water Torture [Suiton: Ijin Ryouiki Mizu Goumon] This is an S, and make an escape route apparent.
Water Release • Crashing Pillar of Heaven [Suiton • Gachan Hashira no Ten]- I assume the range is how far it is up in the air. Give me a dimensions on the actual pillar please.
Suiton:Kaunta Rensu(Water Release:Counter lens I'm not too keen on this since there was just a discussion about nearly this same exact ability on a sword. It'll have to be discussed with Naoko.
Dance of the Condemned [Keito no Mai] -Realize that using this technique brands you, even as a KAge, as a Traitor if there are witnesses.
After those are finished I'll look back through the other ones. One step at a time is easier, chea? | |
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| Subject: Re: Suikage Alohi Izioka Sun Mar 24, 2013 5:39 pm | |
| I fixed what you added and added on to my looks and persona and the jutsu you asked me to llook at. However Naoko said that the Jar was alright to have, she actually recommended that Ihave it. Also I am alright with being considered a traitor lol its not like imma be using the jutsu on a day to day basis. Other than that however I seem to be done. | |
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| Subject: Re: Suikage Alohi Izioka Sun Mar 24, 2013 6:40 pm | |
| The sealing pot is fine.
You will need to add two more flaws so you have 4 and they have to be combat related. Also your strengths max is 30 percent for any stat.
You may only have large chakra pools when:
You are in a clan that specifies it You are a non special release character You do not own another character with a large chakra pool A Jinchuuriki
You have large chakra pool I see these are the rules for chakra pool and you meet none of the requirements.
Suiton Release: Total Body Liquefying Technique [Suiton: Ekika Zenshin no Jutsu] Effect: The user turns every physical thing about themselves to liquid. Description: Alohi turns his whole entire body into a liquid form. Once in this form he can practically control all things liquid simply by submerging himself into the liquid. He can create himself to be much larger than he already is, and/or take the form and shape of whatever he puts his mind to, from the size of a small mouse to the size of a very large whale. Basically this jutsu allows the user to shape shift if submerged in an appropriate amount of liquid. This jutsu stays permanent but the user cannot use any of his other jutsu’s while in this form. Range: N/A Rank: S Water/Suiton Ninjutsu, Rank: S
This is a no the abilitys of the jutsu is that of the Hozuki Clan.
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| Lightning Scorch Technique [Denkou Yakekoge no Jutsu] The user performs a short row of hand seals, ending with his hands pointing towards his victim. Lightning bolts shoot out of his finger tips and dance along the victim's flesh, causing severe burns all over the body. This jutsu has the advantage of being difficult to block or dodge without the victim hiding behind something that doesn't conduct electricity.
Has to be physically touching the enemy.
- Human Lightning Rod [Hiraishin no Jintai] The user emits a powerful field of electrical energy; anyone caught within it gains a negative charge. The user positively charges the air around him, meaning that anyone within the field is constantly shocked by lightning. Although this jutsu is almost impossible to dodge while within the field, the field only extends 10 meters from the user. This jutsu also does a great job of disrupting electrical jutsu aimed at the user.
lower the range. That's a tad large range.
Grasp of the Lightning God [Raijin no Haji] The user gathers a tremendous amount of eletricity into their hands. The user then grabs the opponent with both hands and sets up a powerful current of eletricity through the opponent's body. This eletricity not only electrifies its victim, but also renders the area around where the opponent is holding immobile, although other parts of the victim's body can freely move.
I'd prefer this to be a physical touch if it's going to cause a heart attack
Lightning Cage Technique [Denkou no Ori no Jutsu] This technique uses chakra to set up a powerful web of electrical currents surrounding a victim. Lightning shoots from the user's fingertips and surrounds the victim, shocking him as the current surrounds him. The cage deals little damage to those trapped within, but anyone trying to leave is in for a real shock. Unfortunately, while the cage does a good job of keeping most people inside, it also damages anyone trying to reach into the field to attack. Magnetic currents protect the victim from attacks from metal objects, and electrical attacks are likewise useless. | Effect lasts three posts.
I actually like this xD
Utakata - Ephemeral Character Use: Uchiha Itachi Rank: Unknown Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Type: Supplementary
Utakata is a Genjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Uchiha Itachi. Itachi will start this technique by using only one finger on his right hand. His target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, he can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them.
This is a banned tech
Acid Release: Acid Rain Technique [Suiton: Sansei-u no Jutsu] Effect: Covers the surrounding area in rain that is as hot and as lethal as acid itself. Description: Utilizing the famous techniques of the acid release, Alohi, after performing several hand signs creates an area affect jutsu that causes it to rain acid. Anyone or anything caught in the rain will be singed with every drop. The singes to burn and are rather painful to the touch. They hurt everyone but the user and can burn through just about anything except solid earth. Alohi can turn the jutsu on and off whenever he pleases but he can only turn it on at the most two times. Range: 32 foot radius Rank: S
This will also harm the user.
Acid Release: Acid River Technique [Suiton: Sansei Kasen no Jutsu] Effect: A large river of acid is created and is at melting temperature if someone is to touch it or be submerged in it. Description: Utilizing the famous techniques of the acid release, Alohi, after performing several hand signs creates a large mass of acid that jets from his mouth onto the battle field which he then shoots toward his desired target or targets. The stream can only be shot in one direction and covers the field 25 feet vertically and 10 feet horizontally. This jutsu’s requires a large mass of chakra and should considerably be used before as a first move or a last resort. Range: 25 Rank: S
Reduce the range a bit. Acid is a touchy subject and is boarder line op lol.
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