Karite "Reaper"
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: —
Description: The user makes a sudden attack by pushing the scythe down and pulling the underside back, all the while turning it to aim for an extremity to remove. This attack is fast, fast enough to catch a low level taijutsu user off guard.

Chuushin Katsu "Heart Rip"
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: —
Description: The user makes a sudden attack by pushing the scythe downward towards the heart of his opponent. This attack is fast.

Hone Yubi "Bone Finger"
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: —
Description: The user follows up a failed attack technique by spinning the scythe around his arm to reveal the pointed reverse end, quickly jabbing it at the target. When using the double-bladed scythe, it will effect the target more since there is another blade at the other side.

Fukyuu Karite "Immortal Reaper"
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Defensive only, cannot defend against ninjutsu or taijutsu greater than the rank of Fukyuu Karite, which can never exceed the user's rank.
Description: The user rapidly spins the scythe, blocking a taijutsu or ninjutsu attack (ninjutsu can only be blocked by implementing chakra into the scythe). If Fukyuu Karite is B rank, it deflects lower ranked attacks.

Minori Sou "Harvest Begins"
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Leaves the user open to many attacks.
Description: The user begins the signature attack of the style, the Minori, by spinning to increase the momentum of follow-up attacks. Without the other Minori skills, this is simply a powerful spinning attack.

Kan Minori "First Harvest"
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Damage is greatly reduced if the Minori Sou strike misses or is blocked.
Description: The user continues the Minori attack, following up the Minori Sou with an attack that does a tearing motion through the opponent's shoulder and sideways through the torso, ending at the hip. This can easily overpower a weak taijutsu user's defense.

Lesser Plough
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Can trap the scythe in the ground for one whole post if the ground is soft enough like mud or semi-frozen ice.
Description: The user swings with great might in a perfectly downward swing to the target. Cannot be directly blocked with taijutsu or ninjutsu below B rank since chakra is used to give the scythe a small explosive force when it stops. If it strikes the ground, it creates a 5' long rip in the earth.

Ritoru Makai "Lesser Hell"
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Causes damage to the user.
Description: The user does three rapid attacks by holding the scythe diagonally and swinging in an X pattern, finishing with a horizontal attack across the gut. Performing the attack causes the other end of the scythe to hit the user twice, which causes more damage with the use of the double-bladed scythe. This attack is very hard to dodge or block.

Taibu Karite "Greater Reaper"
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Leaves the user open to attacks temporarily.
Description: The user swings the scythe from behind his head to decapitate the target suddenly. This attack is fast.

Nibai Chuushin Katsu "Double Heart Rip"
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Finishes facing away from the target.
Description: The user swings down from the resting position to rip the heart of the opponent. Immediately after, the user spins, allowing the backside of the scythe to rip at the target as well. If the user is using the double-bladed scythe, he simply stabs backwards.

Souhou no Oujou "Touch of Death"
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback:---
Description: The user instantly follows up a block or dodge by using this technique. The user spins his body around, pivoting on his feet in such a way to move towards a dodging opponent or around a blocking opponent, swinging the reverse end of the scythe at the target.

Taibu Minori "Greater Harvest"
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback:---
Description: The user energizes a Double-Bladed Scythe with chakra, causing the attack done by one of the blades to have explosive force that breaks anything less than A ranked defensive moves and other blades with the same power. The user then spins in a circle in close range, causing the target to lose such defensive ninjutsu and sends weapons used to defend away from the target, leaving him open for the other blade. The second attack forces the opponent back and causes severe damage to wherever it hits.


Niban Minori "Second Harvest"
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Damage is greatly reduced if defenses are stronger than B rank.
Description: The user twirls the Double-Bladed Scythe much like a baton, closing in rapidly on the target. This is a twin motion, since the spinning scythe deflects oncoming ninjutsu at the rank of Immortal Reaper, finally the user attacks and tears through B and lower release shields and taijutsu, turning the user into a nearly unstoppable force.

Taibu Suki "Greater Plough"
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: —
Description: The user swings the scythe straight down, implementing chakra to the scythe to harm the target, creating an explosive energy that makes blocking the attack without the blade fruitless. If it strikes the ground, it explodes, creating a widening crater in front of the scythe, a conical depression that is 12 yards long and 7 yards wide, and sending a spray of stones from the ground.

Kouki Minori no za Shinigami "Final Harvest of the Death God"
Rank: A
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: none
Drawback: Damage is greatly reduced if any attack misses.
Description: The user performs the Minori Sou to increase the power of the Taibu Minori. The entire attack is combined after the Niban Minori is used to close in, creating a devastating combination attack that few can withstand.

Taibu Makai no za Shinigami "Greater Hell of the Death God"
Rank: S
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Whatever element the user uses, they will become severely injured if it hits themselves or allies. The slightest touch from the blade on the user will harm them equally causing the effects on the target to be the same to the user. This technique is extremely hard to block but if able to redirect it with luck, it can effect both the user and the target even with the slightest touch. Anyone in the way will be effected as well. Technique can be only used once every 2 threads.
Description: The user holds any one-handed seal, causing the scythe to become ethereal and pulse with whatever release they wish. But the user must have that release.

   Fire - The ethereal blade glows a deep crimson, and any strike that hits the target causes their blood to boil under their skin, causing internal damage and fever.
   Water - The ethereal blade glows a navy blue, and any strike that hits the target sucks the life-giving water from their body, pulling it to the blade, causing severe dehydration with multiple hits.
   Lightning - The ethereal blade glows a golden yellow, and any strike that hits the target instantly causes the area around the strike to become limp and useless for the rest of the thread or until healed.
   Earth - The ethereal blade glows a near black color, and any strike that hits the target causes the minerals and metals in the body to clump together, creating clots and sharp pieces of stone in the blood of the target.
   Wind - The ethereal blade glows a shining white, and any strike that hits the target absorbs the oxygen from the blood, severely weakening the target and exhausting them quickly.

Gyaku Karite "Reverse Reaper"
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Deals little damage.
Description: The user defends himself in close range combat by catching the blade, fist, or other item with the staff of the scythe and his open hand, twisting his body and repelling the attacker several feet away.

Gyaku Chuushin Getikai "Reverse Heart Repulse"
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Is limited to attacks from the sides or behind. Technique is very difficult to perform, since the user must be prepared for the attack.
Description: The user is able to deflect an attack from behind or to his sides when he is prepared by using the Gyaku Chuushin Getikai. When the target is close enough, the user swings his scythe in such a way that the primary blade is just behind the target's shoulder and the staff is on their shoulder. The user then forces the target backwards through the scythe with a powerful kick.

Sanban Minori "Reverse Harvest"
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: ---
Description: The user empowers his Double-Bladed Scythe with chakra and runs toward the opponent, spinning the scythe in front of himself. Any ninjutsu or genjutsu that are B rank and below that are go through the scythe are burned away, and the maker of the ninjutsu or genjutsu is prevented from using chakra through considerable pain for the following round.

Oni Tonton "Demon Tap"
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Ineffective against taijutsu. Can only be used once every two posts.
Description: The user activates an advanced version of the Immortal Reaper, only needing to push the end of the staff in the direction of a ninjutsu of B rank or below to instantly absorb the attack, giving the user three seconds before it is fired out of the reverse side of the scythe. Talon does not gain any kind of chakra from absorbing the attack, it merely gives him time to aim to counter fire

Gyaku Suki "Reverse Plough"
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Deals little damage.
Description: The user performs a special variant of the lesser plough, instead of striking at the opponent, the user pushes the blade end straight towards the target, releasing the wave into the air and forcing the target back.

Oni Karite "Demon Reaper"
Rank: A
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Consumes a large amount of chakra. Area ninjutsu or dome-like genjutsu cannot be reversed or blocked.
Description: The user empowers his scythe with chakra, spinning it rapidly in front of himself. This technique can block an A ranked ninjutsu or reverse the effects of a B ranked Genjutsu due to it disrupting his chakra as it swings, but it consumes twice as much chakra as the technique blocked or reversed.

Kouki Minori no za Karite "Final Harvest of the Reaper"
Rank: A
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Deals little damage.
Description: The user performs the Minori Sou to increase the power of the Sanban Minori to double it's strength. Additionally, the scythe projects a 5 meter tall wave of energy that pushes back any solid object within 20 feet of the user.

Taibu Makai no za Karite "Greater Hell of the Reaper"
Rank: S
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Description
Special: —
Drawback: Deals little damage.
Description: The user holds a one-handed seal for a post, causing the scythe to gain the attributes of the elements that are used for the following 6 rounds. (Talon can only use elements that he has)

   Fire - The blade ignites, burning those it strikes.
   Water - The blade liquifies, allowing the user to bypass ninjutsu defenses.
   Lightning - The blade sparks to life, electrocuting those it strikes.
   Earth - The blade expands and becomes a shield as well as a blade.
   Wind - The blade becomes a wind blade, able to bypass physical defenses.

..approved but for future reference DONT MAKE SO MANY lol

approved 2/2

Okay Amy i dont think you read this fully, so i am going to point something out.

Taibu Makai no za Karite "Greater Hell of the Reaper" - This cannot give your scythe the attributes of the 5 elements unless your character has 5 elements which at max stating no matter what rank is 3 so change this to match the site rules as I am not allowing free manipulation over every element within a weapon unless your character has it.

This does not let him have all five elements, instead it lists what happens when an element is applied, it even states that he needs said element for the effect to occur.

Most of these are little issues that were not that big of a deal as we do not have a guide for this type of stuff.

Next were going to look at demon which does not absorb, it redirects which is different than chakra absorption.

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• Taibu Makai no za Karite "Greater Hell of the Reaper" - This cannot give your scythe the attributes of the 5 elements unless your character has 5 elements which at max stating no matter what rank is 3 so change this to match the site rules as I am not allowing free manipulation over every element within a weapon unless your character has it.
  
• Kouki Minori no za Karite "Final Harvest of the Reaper"- How big is the wave it makes? Does it do any damage to the enemy the wave?
  
• Oni Karite "Demon Reaper"- Remove the genjutsu part.
  
• Taibu Suki "Greater Plough" - Exploding scythe attacks this makes no sense remove it.
  
• Oni Tonton "Demon Tap" No chakra absorbing of any kind weither the gain the chakra or not as it is banned.
  
• Karite "Reaper" How fast?
  
• Fukyuu Karite "Immortal Reaper" Seems a cheap way of blocking attacks without costs good try but again no not without the cost of chakra and again this attack would be A rank to block anything major in scale and cost more chakra to do so.
  
• I am suggest you read through the rest of these and add anything you mind be missing like speeds of attacks or the strength of attacks. Also read through them and remove the cheap none chakra costing defenses you have tried to include in this application.
  
• When you have finished bump once and ill check again.
  

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Correct as stated or it will be archived if it is a refusal of editing.

I DID what did I miss?

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Taibu Makai no za Karite "Greater Hell of the Reaper" - This cannot give your scythe the attributes of the 5 elements unless your character has 5 elements which at max stating no matter what rank is 3 so change this to match the site rules as I am not allowing free manipulation over every element within a weapon unless your character has it.

You don't seem to understand what he's saying. He's not saying that all 5 elements can be used, he's saying that these are the effects depending on which one of the five elements is used.

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Taibu Suki "Greater Plough" - Exploding scythe attacks this makes no sense remove it.

I think he's referring to the ground exploding, but it could be worded better. I'd suggest an edit to clarify.

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Oni Tonton "Demon Tap" No chakra absorbing of any kind weither the gain the chakra or not as it is banned.

Again, could be more clearly worded, but it doesn't seem to be a chakra absorption jutsu. It seems to reflect a jutsu, similar to the Uchiha fan.

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Fukyuu Karite "Immortal Reaper" Seems a cheap way of blocking attacks without costs good try but again no not without the cost of chakra and again this attack would be A rank to block anything major in scale and cost more chakra to do so.

Again the wording is clumsy, but it seems to be blocking attacks of lower rank. That's perfectly acceptable, nothing wrong with it.

I agree with Amy's other critiques, but the ones I quoted don't seem right.

so apparently NO ONE read what i said at all...okay so here we go again, most of these moves have been already changed and fixed Amy i sat here with him and went through them all to make the changes. Before saying the same thing again please read the edits again. If there are any further problems pm me

please read again my comments not all the problems were fixed now pleas eread and edit bump when it is done not gonna say as not my job to tell you its yours to find out what you missed.

Amy, some of your critiques are wrong. You didn't read the app carefully, and you made some mistakes. These jutsu are ready for approval, let them through.

Okay Amy again you have once again ignored what TWO other admins have said, and yes it is your job to point out what is wrong or missing instead of just saying fix it. At this point you are making these users upset. Now i am going to point out a major flaw in what you are saying, you are saying that these taijutsu techniques have no speed or damage output when NONE of the other taijutsu techs on this site even have what you are asking for. Before even trying to say none of these were fixed sit down and go through all of them again.

Change defensive ones so they don't stop things above their rank, then we're good to go.

Reapproved.